Actor Will Smith and director Antoine Fuqua announced on Monday that their upcoming film production “Emancipation” will no longer take place in Georgia in response to the state’s restrictive voting law.
This construction’s awkward, and might be taken to mean the fictional events portrayed were originally set in Georgia, but now will not be. Might I suggest:
Actor Will Smith and director Antoine Fuqua announced on Monday that their upcoming film project “Emancipation” will no longer be produced in Georgia. The move comes in response to the state’s new restrictive voting law.
Just so, you know, it doesn’t read like “We always intended to film in Vancouver, but we were going to set the story in Atlanta. Now, though, we’re doing a find & replace on the script to make ‘Atlanta’ into ‘Topeka’.”
P.S. That sort of thing would get caught by one of them… whatchamacallits… them things you don’t have here at @TPM… copy editors.